I like how you used your 5 senis
I like that you Troy to say and i like your name by ellyana
I like your topic. Did you know the burj khalifa is the tallest building in the world? Daniel
I liked the way you,explained you poem.what did you have for your dinner?
I liked it when you said,''hear the fountains''part.Was it beatiuful there?Unick
Thanks a lots Cameron
Rheanna you describe the Burj Khalifa very well it makes me want to go there! Thank you for sharing your poetry.
ChacolentMaria
Yes i did no buaj khalifa was the tolest bilding in the woeld Rheanna
Nice work Rheanna! The Burj Khalifa poem reminds me of the nice times we had when we used to visit. I love the poem about your hike in Oman.
I would like to visit Bausher fort now that I have read your poem. It sounds very interesting.Ms Catherine
I liked how you used all 5 of your sensesWhat do you do at burj khalifa?Eddy
Hi Rheanna! I liked your poem about Mom. It is funny and made me laugh. I think Mommy need to get her own i Pad. Dada
I had my diner there. Rheanna
We liked reading your poems RheannaHope you come to Scotland soon
Yes i whill.Rheanna
Rheanne, I really like your Mom poem, especially the part about fighting for the iPad. That made me laugh! Thanks for sharing your poems with all of us in Kathmandu.--Mrs. Patch
Great news! Rheanna is coming to Scotland, Grandad and Granny.
Grandad in Scotland, it was great having Rheanna home for a holiday,Granny and Grandad missing you.
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I like how you used your 5 senis
I like that you Troy to say and i like your name by ellyana
I like your topic. Did you know the burj khalifa is the tallest building in the world? Daniel
I liked the way you,explained you poem.what did you have for your dinner?
I liked it when you said,''hear the fountains''part.Was it beatiuful there?Unick
Thanks a lots Cameron
Rheanna you describe the Burj Khalifa very well it makes me want to go there! Thank you for sharing your poetry.
Chacolent
Maria
Yes i did no buaj khalifa was the tolest bilding in the woeld Rheanna
Nice work Rheanna! The Burj Khalifa poem reminds me of the nice times we had when we used to visit. I love the poem about your hike in Oman.
I would like to visit Bausher fort now that I have read your poem. It sounds very interesting.
Ms Catherine
I liked how you used all 5 of your senses
What do you do at burj khalifa?
Eddy
Hi Rheanna! I liked your poem about Mom. It is funny and made me laugh. I think Mommy need to get her own i Pad.
Dada
I had my diner there. Rheanna
We liked reading your poems Rheanna
Hope you come to Scotland soon
Yes i whill.Rheanna
Rheanne,
I really like your Mom poem, especially the part about fighting for the iPad. That made me laugh! Thanks for sharing your poems with all of us in Kathmandu.
--Mrs. Patch
Great news! Rheanna is coming to Scotland, Grandad and Granny.
Grandad in Scotland, it was great having Rheanna home for a holiday,
Granny and Grandad missing you.
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