Good duscriveing.lulu
The blue is beautiful carlos
I like you you talked about all your senses. Mr. Hoffman
I love the words you usde By Aarshia
I like it when you describe yor poise. Harrison
I like how you talk rile nisle and Ilikedid you're colaring and Panting by emaan
I like you toying that you jrou by ellyana
I like your detale like I smell the fresh air.sincerly joshua
I liked it when you said'I smelled the fresh air. sincerely,Aurelie
you have asome details.do you like birds? from, Indira
Yes i like birds. Athina
Athina I loved reading your poems and I got hungry thinking of all that chocolate cake. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
I liked your poems especially the one about Germany.Ms Catherine
I like how you used rhythm.Danjal
I liked your taism poem. Rheanna
i like how you add detail aisha
AthinaYour picture is very neat.Eddy
That was awesome ...Diya
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21 comments:
Good duscriveing.lulu
The blue is beautiful carlos
I like you you talked about all your senses. Mr. Hoffman
I love the words you usde By Aarshia
I like it when you describe yor poise. Harrison
I like how you talk rile nisle and Ilikedid you're colaring and
Panting by emaan
I like you toying that you jrou by ellyana
I like your detale like I smell the fresh air.sincerly joshua
I liked it when you said'I smelled the fresh air. sincerely,Aurelie
you have asome details.do you like birds? from, Indira
you have asome details.do you like birds? from, Indira
you have asome details.do you like birds? from, Indira
Yes i like birds. Athina
Athina I loved reading your poems and I got hungry thinking of all that chocolate cake. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
I liked your poems especially the one about Germany.
Ms Catherine
I like how you used rhythm.Danjal
I liked your taism poem. Rheanna
i like how you add detail aisha
i like how you add detail aisha
Athina
Your picture is very neat.
Eddy
That was awesome ...Diya
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