Leen, You have some great poems in your collection. Congratulation. My favorite was about your Tooth being pulled. I liked that you were excited to tell your teacher and the drawing you included. It helped me picture how happy you were at the end. Mr. Hovland
Leen I like all of your poems. My favorite one was the one about you saying that you want your tooth to go out. It reminds me of when my first tooth came out.
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leen one pooum just like this my leef pooum.do you like catpillrs?
leen one uv yor pooums re simlr pooum to yor catpillr pooum it is my leef pooum.doyou like catupillrs?
I love the polem called stary
night because the house and the
stars.Have you seen a shooting
star?
Esha
I love the polem called stary
night because the house and the
stars.Have you seen a shooting
star?
Esha
I like your picture and writing on all of your poems becase it is colorful and the writing is coiorful
to - Noah
My thooth is also looose Leen is yor thooth loose
Sania
Leen, You have some great poems in your collection. Congratulation. My favorite was about your Tooth being pulled. I liked that you were excited to tell your teacher and the drawing you included. It helped me picture how happy you were at the end. Mr. Hovland
I liked in side my heart ...............
Lulu
Keen,
Your pictures on your poems are beautiful
-Athina
What's your favorite part???
Leen I like all of your poems. My favorite one was the one about you saying that you want your tooth to go out. It reminds me of when my first tooth came out.
Your reading buddy,
Daffine
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