Hoppin 1JT Poetry: Aiden 12-13

Aiden 12-13

Starry Night Poem

Beach House

Poetry Anthology

25 comments:

Anonymous said...: i like yar parm byjacob; February 23, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Anonymous said...: I like it because your pichr
Zulfan; February 23, 2013 at 2:30 PM
Anonymous said...: I loved your work kian; February 23, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Anonymous said...: Nice job you good friend oh it's me kyle; February 23, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Anonymous said...: I like your vouc good job
Zulfan; February 23, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Anonymous said...: Good job I lilt Yor voice love Qais Aiden; February 23, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Anonymous said...: I like your words Aaron; February 25, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Anonymous said...: I like when you said the pamtree I clim.ayman; February 25, 2013 at 1:54 PM
Anonymous said...: Do you like swimming? I do! Daniel; February 25, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Anonymous said...: Your poem is nice
Taniya; February 25, 2013 at 2:00 PM
Anonymous said...: You did awesome details and read it like a real poet.I have been to a beach house and you described a real beach house like it should be!; March 1, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Anonymous said...: You really have a cook at your beach house Aiden?That is awesome!; March 1, 2013 at 8:16 AM
Anonymous said...: I liked how you used your big voice
Do you eat any cocanuts?

Eddy; March 3, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Anonymous said...: Was it made of stiks?

From Jason; March 3, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Unknown said...: Aiden your poems are so colorful and interesting. I loved the one about Eddy it made me smile. Thank you for sharing your poetry.; March 4, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Unknown said...: Aiden your poems are so colorful and interesting. I loved the one about Eddy it made me smile. Thank you for sharing your poetry.; March 4, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Anonymous said...: I love it was it hot or coalld or wharm?; March 5, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Anonymous said...: Thank you Eddy I do eat cokinutes aiden; March 5, 2013 at 10:04 AM
Catherine said...: I can really feel what it was like to see the majestic lions in Tanzania through your poem. Well done!
Ms Catherine; March 9, 2013 at 12:00 PM
Anonymous said...: That poem was so sweet it felt like I was at the beach

Finn 4TI; March 10, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Anonymous said...: I like how you where telling me about the beach. Arya 4ti; March 10, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Anonymous said...: i like how you took your time
rohit; March 10, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Anonymous said...: i like your poem aidn from abdul; March 10, 2013 at 11:39 AM
Unknown said...: Aiden, Dad here, reading your poetry from Iraq and its AMAZING!! I am very proud of you and I can't wait to get home so I can tickle you very long! Be good for Mom! Love Dad; March 25, 2013 at 12:20 AM
Unknown said...: Aiden, Dad here and I am reading your poetry from Iraq and its AMAZING!! I am very proud of you and I cannot wait to get home so I can tickle you for a very long time! Be good for your Mom!! Love Dad; March 25, 2013 at 12:22 AM

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