I like when you used your senses I love your poem it was grate I like when you were firming words you used jazzy words you mad me feel happy love dee dee
Hi Jason, I liked listening to you reading your poem. When I saw the illustration it really made me feel the cold. I used to sled down a long hill near my school on a huge plastic bag filled with hay! Do you think that you will write more poems in first grade?
Hi Jason, I like how you said that you slide at the hill end. I uses to slide down the hill with my brother. Do you know someone els who slid down the hill.
Hi Jason I really liked your poem and when I listened to your poem . When I went sleding it was really cold and I was also feeling Cold when you told your story . Next time I will also try to do what you were doing. Do you think you are going to do more poems in first grade?
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Jason,
Your poem is fantastic. The words that you used makes me feel like I am right there in that picture.
It was good and your painting.
Cute vose god job
Camila
Cute vose good job
Zulfan
i love it. jaja. by. rianna
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I like yuro pichr by zaynah
I like how you yosed some of the sencesm. Yaser.
I really like the drwings. By arshia
I like when you used your senses I love your poem it was grate I like when you were firming words you used jazzy words you mad me feel happy love dee dee
YOU did a really good job Jason.
from SANDRO
Good job on your pictures
from Aryan
I like the way you told evry thing you did aiden
Jason I felt cold listening to your poem you described it so well. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
Awsame jason vary awsame Cameron
It was cold when I went thare
From Jason
Guess which was mt favorite poem? Yes...the one about books! Thanks for sharing.
Ms Catherine
i lik whn you said i totch the ice.abdul
i liked how you used your senses in your starry night poem
Eddy
I like your rainbow poem.rheanna
I loved that poem it was so sweet
Finn 4TI
Your poem was so fantastic it was cool and it was very beautiful and i felt like i was in the picture with you . Tamara:} 4TI
I liked your poem because it made me feel that I was there.
Miguel 4TI
Hi Jason I loved your drawing because it really matchs your poem
Isa 4ti
Jason
It felt like I was in the snow
you described it really well and your poem was amazing.
Michelle 4TI
I love your poem me because you said what you thought and what you are
Kyeong Eun 4TI
Hi Jason I loved your drawing because it really matchs your poem
Isa 4ti
Hi Jason,
I really like your poem about the fort. Did you go there for Discover Oman??? It sounds really fun!!
From
Anneloes 4TI
I like your poem because I love the snow and the winter.Rodrigo 4ti
Hi Jason,
I liked listening to you reading your poem. When I saw the illustration it really made me feel the cold. I used to sled down a long hill near my school on a huge plastic bag filled with hay! Do you think that you will write more poems in first grade?
Jason,I love the pictures. I feel there right now!I love Pokemon to! How long was the street that you live on?
Jayson,I love the pictures. I feel there right now!I love Pokemon to! How long was the street that you live on?
Hi Jason, I like how you said that you slide at the hill end. I uses to slide down the hill with my brother. Do you know someone els who slid down the hill.
Jason I also play Pokemon sometimes. How was the street like?
Hi Jason
I really liked your poem and when I listened to your poem .
When I went sleding it was really cold and I was also feeling
Cold when you told your story . Next time I will also try to do what you were doing. Do you think you are going to do more poems in first grade?
HI Jason, I loved reading your poems!! You are a great writer!!
Auntie Stacy <3
Jason, When I read the poem about Grandma's house I felt like I was sledding with you and your cousins...I could feel the cold too.
Aunt Stacy
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