Hi Rayhun I like how you said I don't know how to go on the red monkey bars. When I was in first grade I did not know how to go on the red monkey bars.Do you think that you will do more comments in first grade?
Hi Rayhun I like how you said I don't know how to go on the red monkey bars. When I was in first grade I did not know how to go on the red monkey bars.Do you think that you will do more comments in first grade?
Rayhun - I liked reading your poem about the goats at the hot springs - that made me laugh. Did the goats make you laugh too? What color were the goats? Thank you for sharing these poems. -Eddy's Mom
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I like your words Aaron
I like how you talk rile soft
Wow your poem was awesome Nicholas
Thank you
Rayhun you will be swinging on those red monkey bars before you know it! Thank you for sharing your poetry.
I like your poems because you used some very descriptive words.
MS Catherine
your starry night poem was cool!
what things do you do at the playground?
4TI Layan
I like how you said i dont know how to use them.
play pokemon with my frends
rayhun
I liked how you put details in the poem cam.
Eddy
Hi Rayhun I like how you said I don't know how to go on the red monkey bars. When I was in first grade I did not know how to go on the red monkey bars.Do you think that you will do more comments in first grade?
Hi Rayhun I like how you said I don't know how to go on the red monkey bars. When I was in first grade I did not know how to go on the red monkey bars.Do you think that you will do more comments in first grade?
Rayhun - I liked reading your poem about the goats at the hot springs - that made me laugh. Did the goats make you laugh too? What color were the goats?
Thank you for sharing these poems.
-Eddy's Mom
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