I love all your poems Hana.you did a great work.i loved the way you felt about the mosque and I am sure your grandpa and grand ma are very proud of you.and I loved the butterfly poem ..the way you described the little butterfly remind me of you ...you are my little butterfly ..Go on Hana Go Go Go.
23 comments:
niswac
You shod you like the mosc .lulu
I like when you used mouse and you told about what you do their your poem
I like how you had to stop and think.
Tenika
Good job I love your feel
By katie
Sounds peaceful!
Mons,
You had lots of fun I guess.:1What are your grandads name?unick
I love how you yos mosct.love valentina
I dot know his nam but I col him gido it is in arbick becas I'm from egygpt. from hana
I love the words that you uedes! Maria
Why you think the mosque is a spesal place for you Aisha
Why you think the mosque is a spesal place for you Aisha
You describe the Mosque beautifully Hana. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
I like your poem called Energy. I like the rhyme at the end. Nice work!
Ms Catherine
I like your picture for the mosque poem and I think your poem is descriptive.
4TI
I like your poem Blue you had amazing sky picture and you described the color very well
Kyeong Eun 4TI
I like your poem Blue you had amazing sky picture and you described the color very well
Kyeong Eun 4TI
4TI Layan
I loved how you colored your backround and your adjectives.
Hi Hana! I loved your poems!! They are so colorful and descriptive! You are a grate writer!
From: Dori 4TI
I love all your poems Hana.you did a great work.i loved the way you felt about the mosque and I am sure your grandpa and grand ma are very proud of you.and I loved the butterfly poem ..the way you described the little butterfly remind me of you ...you are my little butterfly ..Go on Hana Go Go Go.
I love your poem blue because i love blue too.Valentina
I love the poem I love ice cream
Maria
Hana
I liked how you took a break
By Eddy
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