Hi Cameron- I loved reading all of your poems. Your Burj Khalifa poem was really descriptive and I thought the Shatti Beach poem reminded me of "Bats at the Beach". I can really understand how you are feeling with your word choice.
I enjoyed reading all of your poems. I thought that you used words that really help me paint a picture in my mind of what you described. Your poem about cobras made them seem very scary. I also really like how you talked about how you could touch the night in your Burg Khalifa poem. That was great. Thank you for sharing your awesome poems!
Hi Cameron! I love love love your poetry. When I read your words I can picture you reading them to a group on the patio. Your vivid imagination and expressions come through the lines. Fantastic job! I would like a print of your cobra poem, how much are you selling them for? Hugs from Auntie Stacy.
Dear Cam, You have such great talent both in poetry and your artwork! I think that your starry night poem was my favorite. Your artwork on that was like Van Gogh. All the others were really good too!
Dear Cameron, I just listened to your poem about Burjal Khalifa and I loved what you had to say about the city! I also loved how you said you could feel the wind, SMELL the moon, and touch the night. That is a very interesting way to express how you feel, and what you observe. Your other poems about birdies, cobras,and beaches were great as well. You were very thoughtful to write about your friends too. Good job, you are a smart boy, Cam! Gramma Jan and Grampa Mel
Cameron, I was so happy to see and hear your poetry. You are an amazing talent and a rising star! Your use of descriptive words helps me to see and feel your poetry. I just went outside to touch the night and find out if I, too could smell the moon...and I could! Thank you for your words and thoughts.
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Illove your picture and your words that you chosen
Elinor
Colors are beautiful carlos
Nice work dude I like it a lot it' me Kyle
Nice work kian
I like how you side a li
I like you riming in the poem. Eshan
i woud complement you because you read it realy loudly. by singhe
WOW WOW WOW WOW!Your poem was awesome!How many things did you see there?
Your poem was amazing.
I've bein there did you go to alatis?
i like when you say i smell the moon rheanna
Cameron I love that you think it is awesome! Your poem is awesome too. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
Cameron
I like your poetry
Eddy
Did you go in the birgculefa?
Jason
Your poem about Shatti beach made me feel like running down there and splashing in the sea! Thanks for sharing your poems.
Ms Catherine
Hi Cameron-
I loved reading all of your poems. Your Burj Khalifa poem was really descriptive and I thought the Shatti Beach poem reminded me of "Bats at the Beach". I can really understand how you are feeling with your word choice.
Thank you for sharing!
Love,
Mommy
Cameron,
I enjoyed reading all of your poems. I thought that you used words that really help me paint a picture in my mind of what you described. Your poem about cobras made them seem very scary. I also really like how you talked about how you could touch the night in your Burg Khalifa poem. That was great. Thank you for sharing your awesome poems!
Love Dad
Wonderful choice of words! Your pictures are amazing. What a talented poet! We love it all Cameron!
Love, Gramma and Grampa
Hi Cameron! I love love love your poetry. When I read your words I can picture you reading them to a group on the patio. Your vivid imagination and expressions come through the lines. Fantastic job! I would like a print of your cobra poem, how much are you selling them for? Hugs from Auntie Stacy.
I loved that poem it made me feel like I was there
Hi Cameron,
I like your poem about birds. You drew a really good picture and It was a wonderful poem.
From,
Anneloes 4TI
Cameron yours is amazing and i loved how you were talking about the tower in dubai and this poem made me feel so good
I like your poem because it is a colorful picture and you used perfect words you used the right words.
4TI
I enjoyed your poem because I have been to the burj al khalifa
Thank you for makeing a poem about me
rayhun
i liked how you aded nice words
at the end. from haya.
i like how you put a poem of me and rayhun. jason
Cam i have bein to shatti beach a lot of times
rayhun
hi mom bremember i told you that
mabey i wode cheke the blog
well i did
Hi Cameron- I do see that!Looks like you have lots of nice comments from all over the world!
Love,
Mommy
Dear Cam, You have such great talent both in poetry and your artwork! I think that your starry night poem was my favorite. Your artwork on that was like Van Gogh. All the others were really good too!
Love,
Jeannie
Cameron -
Your poems are wonderful. You're so talented. My favorite is the one called "Jason."
Love, Claudie
Dear Cameron, I just listened to your poem about Burjal Khalifa and I loved what you had to say about the city! I also loved how you said you could feel the wind, SMELL the moon, and touch the night. That is a very interesting way to express how you feel, and what you observe. Your other poems about birdies, cobras,and beaches were great as well. You were very thoughtful to write about your friends too. Good job, you are a smart boy, Cam! Gramma Jan and Grampa Mel
P.S. I forgot to send you our hugs and love from Gramma Jan and Grampa Mel. Have fun at school!<3
Cameron,
I was so happy to see and hear your poetry. You are an amazing talent and a rising star! Your use of descriptive words helps me to see and feel your poetry. I just went outside to touch the night and find out if I, too could smell the moon...and I could! Thank you for your words and thoughts.
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