My favorite poems were: "Ocean" and "My House." I could picture the ocean in my mind when you described it. Does the poem make you think of the ocean in Muscat or Sanibel Island? In the poem "My House" you said that you could smell food cooking - what kind of food did you smell?" When I was little I liked coming inside and smelling food cooking in my house -- especially spaghetti! -Mama
Hi Eddy! Your poems are wonderful! The words you use to describe the things in your poem create great pictures in my mind! I am so proud to see what a wonderful writer you are becoming! Keep writing! We miss you at Hearst!
Hi Eddy! Your poems are wonderful! The words you use to describe the things in your poem create great pictures in my mind! I am so proud to see what a wonderful writer you are becoming! Keep writing! We miss you at Hearst!
39 comments:
I liked the words you chose to describe your house. Great job.
I liked how you used your senses.Daniel
I like your jarring and I like your saying by ell yank
I like your joking and I like your saying by ellyana
I like how you use your sense. Nadine
I like your words. Eshan
I like when you hoods food in yor prime. Harrison
I like your illisteratons and poem. Yaser
I like you-ra raiting
I like your detale like saying I climb my beutiful house.sincerly joshua
Hi Eddy,
I like your details.Wich coler is your front door?Sambed.
Hi sambed
The door on my house is red.
What color is your door on your house?
Eddy
I like your poem book
From Jason
I like when you say i like culers. rheanna
Eddy your poems are fantastic! Tell me what are the diamonds on the ice cream is it sprinkles? Thank you for sharing your poetry.
MS Clodagh
the cone of the Ice cream has sprinkles
what kind of ice cream do you eat?
I like how you used rhythm
I liked you poem about the beach. I would liked to have seen the 'crab city' that you built.
Ms Catherine
My favorite poems were: "Ocean" and "My House." I could picture the ocean in my mind when you described it. Does the poem make you think of the ocean in Muscat or Sanibel Island? In the poem "My House" you said that you could smell food cooking - what kind of food did you smell?" When I was little I liked coming inside and smelling food cooking in my house -- especially spaghetti!
-Mama
i lik ismill food in my hous.abdul
I loved your poem book. Rheanna
Mama
the ocean poem does remind me of muscat and sanibel island.
and inside i smelled pizza for dinner and lemen bars for disert.
Eddy
Mama
the ocean poem does remind me of muscat and sanibel island.
and inside i smelled pizza for dinner and lemen bars for disert.
Eddy
it was fun eddy felipe
i like your iiilstrachon
i like your iiilstrachon.abdul
i like your iiilstrachon.abdul
I like how you seid the numbrs veronica
i like your poem
rohit
I like the way you seid 12345678910. Aiden
Eddy - what kind of pizza?
-Mama
Hi Eddy! Your poems are wonderful! The words you use to describe the things in your poem create great pictures in my mind! I am so proud to see what a wonderful writer you are becoming! Keep writing! We miss you at Hearst!
-Ms. Anderson
Hi Eddy! Your poems are wonderful! The words you use to describe the things in your poem create great pictures in my mind! I am so proud to see what a wonderful writer you are becoming! Keep writing! We miss you at Hearst!
-Ms. Anderson
Mama
I smelled cheese pizza
Eddy
I like how you added lots of interesting details like when you said the colors of the rocks in rocky mountain. from yangki
You are very independent ...good!
You are very independent ..Good! Diya
You spoke confidently .....Diya
I like my poetry book so much!
Eddy
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